Friday, February 6, 2009

Graduation Speech

"A man is but the product of his thoughts what he thinks, he becomes." Gandhi Mohandas. High school went by faster than I had expected. Now my senior year has almost reached its end and I wonder where those four years went. I know now that those four years have been some of the most memorable moments of my life. There has been a lot of ups and downs but over all I have had a fun time. I can remember being a freshmen and the first day of school I thought i was going to get made fun of or be picked on, but that didnt happen. I was excepted as who I was and nothing more than that. At first I was nervous then as the days went on I started to enjoy being around those kids that your supposed to look up to. I remember once as a freshmen it was the first week of school and I was in pysical fitness class. There was this kid that knocked the books out of my hands and said "Welcome to High school". For a couple of weeks after that I tryed to stay away from that kid because I thought he was going to keep giving me grief. After a couple weeks I thought he was going to be the kid that picked on me for my high school years but that wasnt the reality of it. I found out that all the ups and downs of my high school years have been just nothing more than memories to remember and times to forget, for your thoughts are the product of your being, and what you want to be will be consumed by your thoughts.

2 comments:

  1. Need more meat! Also try to break it into paragraphs ... Intro should state the purpose of the speech body paragraphs and conclusion.

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  2. Its not a bad speech, but the ending could be a little better. What was the reality of it? What did you learn from all of your ups and downs? Zack

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